SMOKING ( CAUSES AND EFFECTS)
In the past smoking was not a big issue or problem. Smoking becomes common
thing for adult people, especially for men. They have many reasons to
smoke. However, nowadays smoking has increased in many different ways. There
are several causes and dangerous effects of the increase of smoking.
People start smoking for a variety of different reasons. Some people think
it looks cool. Others start because their family members or friends smoke, so
they feel curious about how to smoke and how the taste of cigarette. Another
reason is when people feels stress or have a lot of free time, they will fill
the time with smoking, because smoking make them relax. And the main cause is
so many cigarettes advertisement. Almost all public places have
cigarette banner, cigarette companies are have allowed advertising on TV,
radio, and in many magazines. Therefore, it’s hard to deny the smoking and
smokers.
As a consequence of smoking, they must face many negative effects from
smoking. The biggest danger effects are lung cancer and mouth cancer, because
cigarettes are contains many harmful chemical substances. If they get effects from
smoking, they must take care for their self then. They have to do medical
treatment for their healthy. It makes them lose time for their family. In other
hand, smoking needs money to buy the cigarettes. Moreover, when they sick
because of smoking, they needs a lot of money to pay the medical treatment and
the medicine.
In Conclusion, smoking is a very bad habit. Many people have died from
smoking. All these effects should be enough
to lead anyone to leave
smoking. The government must have wise solution and be firm to get rid of
it.
i think i just find one mistake:
BalasHapus1. when they sick = when they are sick